It's a lot, yeah. And it's all out of order, so writing it down helps me make some sense of it.
[When she moves aside so he can see the painting, his eyes widen. He really likes her style.]
Wow. That is beautiful. ... Is the wolf on fire?
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It's a lot, yeah. And it's all out of order, so writing it down helps me make some sense of it.
[When she moves aside so he can see the painting, his eyes widen. He really likes her style.]
Wow. That is beautiful. ... Is the wolf on fire?